Thursday, September 11, 2014
A Memory In A Bottle
A memory that I would
bottle up is the week I went to Savannah, Georgia. That was one of the best
weeks of my life so far. It was the first time I've ever traveled so far away from
home. So I was really nervous but once I got there I felt really happy cause I loved
how felt comfortable imminently when we arrived. The hotel was really nice and I
got share a room with my friends Brooke, Ashley, Taylor, and Erilyn. We walked
around a lot and we saw all of the main sites. The best thing that we did was
go to the beach and look at all the sea animals. My friend Brooke and I held to
jellyfish and many different kinds of sea snails and crabs. After, we stayed at
the beach for four hours we went to a dolphin show. If I ever get a chance I would
probably move to Georgia even though it’s super-hot down there.
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Heh, silly, you spelled immediately wrong. I probably spelled lots of word wrong. You did well, I'm so proud. *sheds tear*
ReplyDeleteInstead of using cause the proper word to use is because. Also, instead of I held to a jellyfish... The to should be a. Your memory seems like a lovely experience that you can and your friends will hold dear for the rest of your guys life.
ReplyDeleteThis was a good blog, but you have a few grammar mistakes that could be fixed.
ReplyDeleteThis was a great post! I loved it!!
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like a truly great time in Georgia! If I ever got the chance to go to Georgia, I would want to hold a jellyfish too! Although, I wouldn't be able to get used to the super-hot weather... Anyways, great post! Just a few grammar mistakes, that's all. :)
ReplyDeleteWhy would you want to move down there if it's really hot? I hate hot weather.
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